Spring is like a perhaps hand
With fine lines that grow
After white Winter has thawed
To create warmth
And defrost you.
This hand creates life
When touching nature
And perhaps will bring smiles to pleasant neighbors.
This hand is weathered
And perhaps quite old,
But this hand brings us youth annually.
Yes, perhaps Spring is like a hand.
I am participating in NaPoWriMo 2013! If you’d like to participate, feel free to check out the link here:Â http://www.napowrimo.net/
For today’s challenge, the first line is from a poem by e.e. cummings that can be found here:Â http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15407
Don’t fret, I will not just be posting poems because I like to mix it up, so I’ll be sure to post some other things as well 🙂 I’m excited to participate in NaPoWriMo! Thank you all for joining me on this journey 😉
Lovely
Yes, I’m about ready for some defrosting! Happy Spring!
Very lovely. May those hands stretch my way.
This was very sweet and touching.. I Liked it.. 😀
It’s so great to read other people’s poetry! Really beautiful. Thank you also for stopping by my blog today!
“perhaps hand” – interesting phrase
Why didn’t I thought of using perhaps as an adjective before? It sounds so instinctive!
love the metaphor here with the wind. nicely done…:))
Loving your poetry!
Lovely, beautiful imagery.
This is Fantastic !! Good job. Another one of my favorites !! Loved it, so meaningful too.
You write beautifully
Beautiful! Loving the imagery and feeling in final rumination.