I wrote a story
Of a man named Steve
Stuck in the past,
Stuck in love
With a girl named Marie.
He couldn’t save her
For nobody could,
Marie was bold
And Marie did what she would.
Marie fell in with a crowd of sorts
That robbed and killed for “the greater good”
Steve, the cop, said “Darling, please don’t.
You’re better than them.
I need you, don’t go!”
But Marie was in deep
And she was the seductress,
The key.
Steve followed her there,
On the dark musky night
Pulled up in his car
Armed with hat, suit, and gun.
Waited, and waited,
Until he saw someone.
“Sweetest Marie”
He mumbled with a sigh
And opened the door.
But alas, that poor chap,
He was too late to save her.
Marie was grabbed by the thief
With a gun jabbed against her jaw
Steve dropped his morals with his gun
For he couldn’t believe what he saw.
This man, so mad
Was willing to kill her,
But behind him, his leader
Rang out with a clatter
A bullet, a bang,
And shot right through them both.
Marie fell to the ground
On top of the man
Both bleeding, and stammering
Feigning perfect health.
“Marie!” Steve cried
And ran to his lady
Stroking her fair hair
Until the moment she passed.
“Who did this?! You monster!”
Steve shouted
When he saw some suits
Running down the street.
He chased them
And shot a few warning bullets
Until one landed on the back of the biggest suit himself.
He stumbled and fell
As Steve finally caught him
And saw his Sheriff’s face staring back
With his last final breaths
He muttered
“Stop looking, you fool.
This was the plan.
Marie was a distraction,
But she messed up and fell in love.”
Haunted by this mystery,
What was Steve to do?
He would never stop searching
Until he found out the truth.
Marie, my sweet love,
I’m still looking, for you.
Flow like the Nile 🙂
That’s so nicely constructed. Enjoyed it much!
I like this very much.
A compelling piece, love can blind us from bigger thoughts and actions. But that’s because love excludes us from the world, the relationship is between the lovers. It seems nothing else matters, tragedy lurks.
I really liked this. Thanks for finding my site, I really like yours too 🙂
I´m usually not into poetry at all, but I couldn´t stop reading this poem!
NICE ONE !!
lovely … and that achingly haunting final line left me breathless. tony
Touching..great job! Thanks for sharing.